Informative vs. Persuasive Speech

• In my persuasive speech I said "um" way to much. In my informative I did that also just not as much.
• My hand gestures and enthusiasm was still lacking but it was an improvement from my informative speech.
• I still need to look towards the edges more. That is one thing I didn't do in either of my speeches.
• In both speeches I think I did well with my speed. I think I spoke slowly and people were able to understand me.
• My hook improved. I didn't have one in my informative and I had a good hook in my persuasive.

How to speech review

Strengths:

• I made good eye contact with the audience.
• I made a good connections with my topic.
• I spoke slowly and clearly.

Weaknesses:

• I didn't show how to do the wrist shot clearly.
• I didn't show enthusiasm.
• I could have expanded more on my actual topic.
• My speech was out of order.
• I need to speak louder.
• I needed a conclusion.