Informative vs. Persuasive Speech

• In my persuasive speech I said "um" way to much. In my informative I did that also just not as much.
• My hand gestures and enthusiasm was still lacking but it was an improvement from my informative speech.
• I still need to look towards the edges more. That is one thing I didn't do in either of my speeches.
• In both speeches I think I did well with my speed. I think I spoke slowly and people were able to understand me.
• My hook improved. I didn't have one in my informative and I had a good hook in my persuasive.

How to speech review

Strengths:

• I made good eye contact with the audience.
• I made a good connections with my topic.
• I spoke slowly and clearly.

Weaknesses:

• I didn't show how to do the wrist shot clearly.
• I didn't show enthusiasm.
• I could have expanded more on my actual topic.
• My speech was out of order.
• I need to speak louder.
• I needed a conclusion.

Speech 2

Throughout my speech I noticed many things I needed to change. For example I looked at my note cards frequently and there were instinces where I looked at my card up to ten seconds. I also was rocking back and forth the whole speech. I lacked enthusiasm which is important to do. I didn't use hand gestures. I also repeated myself a lot on some statistics. So i also need more structure.

During my speech I needed to use my note card more so I could stay on topic and say what I actually wanted to say. I also needed to keep my hands out of my pockets and speak a little slower at times.

Character replacements

I chose Russell Crowe for Gremio because he would fit well for the character.

I chose Zac Efron for Lucentio because Zac Efron pretty boy and so does Lucentio.

I chose Johnny Depp for Hortensio because he is deceitful in most movies.

I chose Mel Gibson for Petruchio because seems like he would do a lot for money.

I chose Geoffrey from Fresh Prince of Bel Air for Tranio because he was also a servant.

I chose Shawn Connery for Baptista because he seems like he would be that kind of father.

I Chose Jessica Alba for Bianca because Jessica Alba is very pretty and Bianca is suppose to be pretty as well.

I chose Rasputia for Katherine because Rasputia is the biggest shrew i have ever seen in a movie.

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