Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Informative vs. Persuasive Speech

  • In my persuasive speech I said "um" way to much. In my informative I did that also just not as much.
  • My hand gestures and enthusiasm was still lacking but it was an improvement from my informative speech.
  • I still need to look towards the edges more. That is one thing I didn't do in either of my speeches.
  • In both speeches I think I did well with my speed. I think I spoke slowly and people were able to understand me.
  • My hook improved. I didn't have one in my informative and I had a good hook in my persuasive.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

How to speech review

Strengths:
  • I made good eye contact with the audience.
  • I made a good connections with my topic.
  • I spoke slowly and clearly.

Weaknesses:

  • I didn't show how to do the wrist shot clearly.
  • I didn't show enthusiasm.
  • I could have expanded more on my actual topic.
  • My speech was out of order.
  • I need to speak louder.
  • I needed a conclusion.

Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Speech 2

Throughout my speech I noticed many things I needed to change. For example I looked at my note cards frequently and there were instinces where I looked at my card up to ten seconds. I also was rocking back and forth the whole speech. I lacked enthusiasm which is important to do. I didn't use hand gestures. I also repeated myself a lot on some statistics. So i also need more structure.

Monday, April 12, 2010

During my speech I needed to use my note card more so I could stay on topic and say what I actually wanted to say. I also needed to keep my hands out of my pockets and speak a little slower at times.

Friday, February 19, 2010

Character replacements

I chose Russell Crowe for Gremio because he would fit well for the character.
I chose Zac Efron for Lucentio because Zac Efron pretty boy and so does Lucentio.


I chose Johnny Depp for Hortensio because he is deceitful in most movies.




I chose Mel Gibson for Petruchio because seems like he would do a lot for money.





I chose Geoffrey from Fresh Prince of Bel Air for Tranio because he was also a servant.






I chose Shawn Connery for Baptista because he seems like he would be that kind of father.







I Chose Jessica Alba for Bianca because Jessica Alba is very pretty and Bianca is suppose to be pretty as well.


I chose Rasputia for Katherine because Rasputia is the biggest shrew i have ever seen in a movie.

Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Tuesday, February 2, 2010